The time I like best is 6am
when the snow is 6 inches deep
which I'm yet to discover
'cause I'm under the covers
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I'm yet to discover 'cause I'm under the covers fast, fast asleep. very fine poem indeed. tony
I like that time for the same reasons. It's cold outside but I'm sleeping in a warm bed. What an effortless pleasure that is.
Excellent! So much said in so few words! Who doesn't like being under the covers at 6 am when it's snowing outside? !
which I'm yet to discover 'cause I'm under the covers fast, fast asleep. very good poem. tony
Wow! Except for having snow outside, I also love sleeping for late hours during winters. Thanks a lot.
especially when it's cold outside, how good it is to stay snuggled warm under the covers. mcgough conveys this well and with humor in this little poem. -gk
The time I like best is 6am........outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem in brief having lofty theme is amazingly shared. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of POD.
snow of 6am o inches deep in poetic heart need discover cause - sleeps under the cover......./// beautiful poetic expression
The time I like best is 6am when the snow is 6 inches deep which I'm yet to discover 'cause I'm under the covers fast, fast asleep. great write great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Sleeping was under warm of snow I was on bed of dawn sun bed tea was on you hand with lullaby and I was sleeping
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Simple straightforward sentences succinctly expressing the wonder of sleep.