The Ticking Hands Comments

A healthy measure of poetic verve and power-driven poignance on display, here...One suggestion...Unless your blanket uppercasing was employed by design for tone-effect, (imo) , the only letters that should be uppercased are those that initiate a new thought or sentence, and of mcourse proper nouns....Strong Penning...~FjR~

A strong powerful fantastic insightful mesmerizing poem! How I wish with all my heart to memorize this outstanding poem and recite this wonderful psalm on the banks of the sacred Ganges! So thank you my friend.Yuh's the finest humane poet ever!