The Tick Of Sentiments. Comments

good one....liked it......vivid and neatly done........

Though poem is bit long, the rustic atmosphere it creates make read worthwile....

Catchy craft you made me attentive from top to the bottom...you made me read twice to enjoy more the beauty of verses...Fantastic soft tone and light mood, great diction used........a delight to read your craft! ! ! 10+++

Very well done and well thought of assimilated ideas, , , voted 10

A captivating poem story. Every stanza has its charm. Your title is perfect for the nostalgic mood of this enchanting read. Kind regards, Sandra

What a glorious journey you have taken me on with wonderful descriptive writing. A beautiful sentimental poem indeed! Karin Anderson

excellent poem sir...love shows itself in words...beautiful journey it was....10

I lost myself in its melody, are you Wordsworth's solitary reaper or Shelley's skylark! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 'Teach me half the gladness That thy brain must know, Such harmonious madness From my lips would flow, The world would listen me.......' CP

this love story is beyond belief, it takes the reader every step of the way and feels every emotion, that this old man feels. this is an awakening to true love. GR888888888T A DOUBLE TEN

A wonderful nature walk awakening all the senses. Very enjoyable, Ravi. A '10! +' Best Wishes, Marilyn

wonderful to read not too long 10

a well crafted piece. A pleasure to read.

the poem is written in good style but i felt it was too long to read..

you stole my heart with such detailed descriptive, sentimental piece of poetry, , , excellent work and a great read.

looks like a hearts sublime whisper on ife.this para is touching 't is a poem worth elegant verses, It is a clear whiff of his bucolic lore. It was this time-piece that linked them And who cannot treasure such living symbols of love? Who cannot own it as his very heart beat? ' voted10 surya

'A monument of sublime love, It is a piece of living memory now. Buried in a far off dale, It is a long, whispering tale, The face of his dear wife unveils.'..unique and smart lines..this piece is nice, ,

I felt tthis poem was a bit 2 long4 me but u wrote well