Sunday, May 11, 2008

** The Three Wishes ** Comments

Rating: 3.5

Son, what will you do
If you are given three wishes from God?
The teacher stares at the 13 years old student
With a deep sigh
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Mary Jean 22 September 2022

Good poem i love it very good poem lovely

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Ashish Goyal 15 August 2009

nice three wishes for the feelings and have a heart for others.

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Ted M 27 July 2009

An excellent poem, though just a wish.

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wise beautiful poem..excellent writing..

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Subroto Chatterjee 13 June 2009

Sweet dreams. Cheers. Subroto

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Allan Macli Borges 10 February 2009

profound and sharp ideas, flowing in little verses that catch us till the end - a beautiful end indeed - you are really gifted. one more 10.

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Carol Rhodes 25 January 2009

If this poem leaves someone 'cold', well, that person ain't got an ounce of awareness, feeling, compassion or love in his mind or heart. This writing of truth is hitting the nail on the head successfully with nothing more needed to make its mark. This is an easy insightful read into what we all need to think of, heed and act upon! Great write! Young boys and girls are sensitive and tuned-in today. They're are the 'Hope Generation'. My best, Carol

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Michelle Melody 10 January 2009

A very soppy poem I'm affraid it leaves me cold

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Electronic Griot 10 January 2009

i feel you on this one. EXCELLENT! (Been there too ;)

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Elbert Matt Loubser 16 December 2008

I like the way this poem swirves away from traditional wishes made by others. The boy is clearly selfless. We would do good to follow his example in the way we think and act.

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David E. Patton 13 December 2008

you are a gifted poet who can write outside of the box through you poetry one can this

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Naidz Ladia 09 December 2008

this poem touches my heart..words are well selected and well defined.. ......If i will be the child, HOW WOULD I BE?

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asma Jone 03 December 2008

love this poem, its so touching...makes your eye teary, like the wishes part awww..

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Zaarah Jasmin 30 November 2008

This poem is really touching, i rate 10..

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*Trusting You* 16 November 2008

I love this poem! this is very good. I am going to add it to my favs. great job. *Purkey Girl*

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Marie Diop 02 November 2008

this is really a touching poem. great job

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Lily Law 24 September 2008

my only wish is that people will see, feel and think just like the boy is.. sir, thanks a lot for an inspiring poem that u had greatly wrote.. ^-^

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Caterpillar MC 22 September 2008

I wish everyone incuding me, would think like the young boy in the poem...

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Marilyn Lott 21 September 2008

This is truly a heartfelt story about someone so young. If only everyone could feel just a small portion of compassion such as this. I enjoyed this, Sulairman! Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Ahvana Dutt 19 September 2008

I give this one a ten. It is a wonderfully and well expressed poem. Keep it up!

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