Son, what will you do
If you are given three wishes from God?
The teacher stares at the 13 years old student
With a deep sigh
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nice three wishes for the feelings and have a heart for others.
profound and sharp ideas, flowing in little verses that catch us till the end - a beautiful end indeed - you are really gifted. one more 10.
If this poem leaves someone 'cold', well, that person ain't got an ounce of awareness, feeling, compassion or love in his mind or heart. This writing of truth is hitting the nail on the head successfully with nothing more needed to make its mark. This is an easy insightful read into what we all need to think of, heed and act upon! Great write! Young boys and girls are sensitive and tuned-in today. They're are the 'Hope Generation'. My best, Carol
I like the way this poem swirves away from traditional wishes made by others. The boy is clearly selfless. We would do good to follow his example in the way we think and act.
you are a gifted poet who can write outside of the box through you poetry one can this
this poem touches my heart..words are well selected and well defined.. ......If i will be the child, HOW WOULD I BE?
love this poem, its so touching...makes your eye teary, like the wishes part awww..
I love this poem! this is very good. I am going to add it to my favs. great job. *Purkey Girl*
my only wish is that people will see, feel and think just like the boy is.. sir, thanks a lot for an inspiring poem that u had greatly wrote.. ^-^
I wish everyone incuding me, would think like the young boy in the poem...
This is truly a heartfelt story about someone so young. If only everyone could feel just a small portion of compassion such as this. I enjoyed this, Sulairman! Best Wishes, Marilyn
I give this one a ten. It is a wonderfully and well expressed poem. Keep it up!
Good poem i love it very good poem lovely