The Three Kisses Comments

well written poem..i loved it

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you did good I would try to make it flow a little more though :)

a very well thought out poem

This is a very sweet poem. Nice write.

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It is amazing. I love it.

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its amazing. superb marvellous i think you used you brain so to make this poem successful. i loveit

oh my god! ! ! i am amazed at the use of your vocabulary and the way you got to e! the use of words and the way you put them together. its really amazing! i really like it! karina

Wow that is amazing. I'm standing in awe of both the poem and your use of words... the ones i can't understanding just add magnitude to the poem.

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Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this piece.