The Threadbare Man Cries In The Third World Comments

Constructive writing. Maybe they need new eyes. Susie.

I like this one very much. You appear to have made a rather political statement in this Nimal. Non Governmental Organisations, appear to be given short shrift here. That so, I fully support the premise. But the narration being your creation, there is no hectoring just a simple statement put so well.

Your slight picture of a threadbare man is exceptional, but the indifference of the material world is so resounding I wonder if his spare tears will be heard.. Each person who reads this poem must decide that for himself. Sandra

Hi a very good poem, i see bouth sides of this i live in England i will have food everyday untill i die, and a doctor to see me when i am ill, and i have no worries only the passing of time.my friends in Thailand work very hard for very little,500 thb a lot of money to see a doctor. but i think there way is best. Take care Roy.

This has just inspired me to write a poem for the poor, in fact that is what I shall call it! Thankyou so much Nimal, I will tell you when I submit it! Love Duncan X