Sunday, August 10, 2014

The Thread Of Love Comments

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The thread of love
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Life leaves behind marks
And when I look back
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Piyush Dey 21 August 2014

even the distance doesn't have the power to break the bond and love between a brother and a sister. written in a subtle manner, this poem is beautiful creation. i like it, dear.

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2014

the thread continues through out our lives from birth to death excellent write

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 August 2014

Beautiful poem reminding the thread of love...Rakhi... Yes, this festival has lot of meaning in our lives. You have portrayed it very beautifully, your love for your sister. God Bless you and your sister. Distance doesn't matter, but a place in heart is most important. On this day, I miss my brother, we lost him when he was child. Thanks for sharing this poem on this special occasion. Loved reading it.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 11 August 2014

such a heartwarming and lovely poem, good craft poet.

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Salini Nair 11 August 2014

beautiful poem on this special day.......yes we all miss this thread as we all are in a hurry. sometimes.................

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Valsa George 10 August 2014

Rakhi.... I feel is a great ritual reminding one of the eternal thread of love! The love, siblings have for each other is just matchless.... It too has a unique charm like any other love. Enjoyed reading your sweet wishes for your sisters who are drawn apart from you through geographical distance, but staying close to your heart!

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