Wednesday, March 7, 2018

The Thorny Crown Comments

Rating: 5.0

You're clinging to the future,
Though the past has let you down.
So many wounds to suture,
Still, you wear your thorny crown.
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Beautiful poem. Of hope and positivity. Endearing rhyme scheme and rhythmic structuring. Top score is nothing

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Sonya Annita Song 08 March 2018

Love your elegant rhymes. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 March 2018

Such a lovely write.....10+++++

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