Tuesday, July 3, 2007

The Thorn Of The Red Rose Comments

Rating: 4.0

There was something she thought again in his mysterious smile,
She tried to forget him but it was not possible even for a little while
She got out of her bed and walked around in the corridor
She was not ready to accept but her heart knew whom she was waiting for
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deepthi mallampalli
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premji premji 10 July 2009

is it a true story? ..................

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Sophie Anonymous 12 January 2009

It touched my heart... you composed the poem nicely.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 March 2008

Another Romeo and Juliet Story well said in the poetry format.

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Evaughn Gray 03 July 2007

that is a very good poem...your friend ~hazel

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