Thursday, August 3, 2017

The Thorn He Needs Comments

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pomegranate sunset and then
the city washes its hands of the day
becomes its own silhouette
a black ink chicanery to hide the imperfections
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GORDON GILHULY
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Captain Cur 07 August 2017

Incisive yet painful words describing lonliness in our technological age where we are all supposedly connected but feel even further apart. he hesitates to light a fire at the mouth of his cave a very strong line.

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Gordon Gilhuly 07 August 2017

Thank you, Captain. I really appreciate your insights and comments.

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