Tuesday, December 22, 2015

The Thorn Comments

Rating: 4.8

I stated with all my grace
I stated will all my proud
That I know the man and it's you
And that sound a little much loud.
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Subarna Chakraborty
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 January 2016

That you're the one I ever met before. I stated with all my faith I stated but much clearer That I know I touched your heart the broken mirror of the heart and poison. nice poem and lovely expressions. life is much more than a love affair. thank you. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 December 2015

gals have one brain and a heart and they use both together guys have two heads and deceitful heart they don't use all together but mostly use their lower I thought all gals by now knew having experienced the net volatile as it may be they often have seen guys scream for love only then having poured all they scram that's why I always tell gals play safe use ondoms but none listens till becomes full their tummy whose is it he asks she can't say yours and he knows so play safe from this love game as the maternity is a mere fact only paternity is hearsay if I may say listen or not 'tis your will God IF ANY will anyway remain SI L E N T AND still

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Manonton Dalan 23 December 2015

very confident i wish i could be like that

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 December 2015

Stating with grace and faith in life is very interesting and amazing definitely. Wise sharing.10

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