Saturday, May 23, 2020

The Things We Can Control Comments

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So many things in life are out of our control
We don't control the sun, the moon, , the stars, the wind…the rain
We don't control those moments when our heart fills up with pain.
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Jim Yerman
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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 May 2020

A well composed poem. Simply superb.....10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2020

To support us through the uncontrollable winds and rain, they will be with us to remove pain. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned with much beauty.

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