Sunday, October 9, 2011

The Things That Make Me Miss You Comments

Rating: 2.8

I miss your footsteps in the hallway.
Arriving home from work at 6, always.
You would always forget to wipe your feet.
Leaving a trail of dirty footprints for me.
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Rachel Henley
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Romeo Della Valle 09 October 2011

Sad but a heart touching write that clearly shows your great feelings and poetic talent! 10+++ God Bless You! Keep inspiring the World with more of your poignant writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Stefanie Fontker 09 October 2011

I feel as though you have lost someone, the circumstances, I could never guess. Pain is evident, in poetry that touches the heart. Lovely.

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