Thursday, November 10, 2005

The Things I Do With Lips (Or I Will Kiss You) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will kiss you
good night
good morning
good day
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Earnest Gatuma 03 November 2016

Undoubtedly emotional touching......Great work.

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Souren Mondal 14 November 2015

Sensual and wonderful.. Thanks..

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Francesca Johnson 03 November 2006

Sweet, loving and sensual. I like it. Love, Fran xx

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

A well-written poem of the flesh is always welcome!

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Simon Whild 10 November 2005

A wonderfully sensual poem that uses uncluttered language to convey a deep feeling of love and passion. I think I'd better loosen my collar!

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Denis Mcmahon 10 November 2005

mmmmmm - all poems should be so sensual

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 10 November 2005

I see your pucker isn't too pooped to pop to please! Interesting write on exploration.

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