Monday, July 30, 2007

The Things I Do For You... Comments

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I should not be concerned with taking pictures of flowers.
Nor picking out flowers for my wedding that may never be.
I should be laying flowers on your grave, so cold, so cold...
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Amanda Saveley
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Sim Dan 08 November 2007

What comment shall I write to such an exquisite poem as this! Beautifully gifted - one feels the warm radiance of the early morning sun in the words you pen - the rising sun... amanda saveley - all the best in life - may you get to teach literature as you wish - and may all your dreams come true

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Agnes Török 01 August 2007

Oh, you truly must have suffured to be able to put what must have been the hardest of burdains to carry and the roughest of memories to put behind in seuch beautiful words. You show seuch clearity in your work, seuch inner power. It is as though you stop time and the picture you give of this very moment and of everything you feel is so real that you could see every bit of dust in the air through your sentences, feel the warmth of the sun in each syllable and hear you breathing within every letter. You take my breath away.

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Amanda Saveley

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