Friday, May 24, 2013

The Things Desired Comments

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If I could have
just one wish granted
in this life
it would only be
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Valerie Dohren 26 May 2013

Happiness is what we all want, but is often so hard to find. Nice little write.

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Heather Wilkins 25 May 2013

Happiness is the key to life. Without it nothing matters very much

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Sylvia Carter 24 May 2013

This a beautiful poem, I know sometimes seems that happiness cannot be found, especially in a relationship, and when you finally find your one it doesn't matter where are what your doing they are on your mind thanks for sharing and keep up the good work! ! ! !

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Manonton Dalan 24 May 2013

that's what i'm trying to accomplish i can relate to that. nice poem

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Captain Cur 24 May 2013

Happiness as elusive as a dream, yet the focal point of all our human schemes.

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