Sunday, February 26, 2012

The Thing That Makes Me Smile Comments

Rating: 3.0

the thing that makes me smile
is not the thing itself
but the thoughts
i gather with it
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Eloida Capuno
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Danny Draper 29 February 2012

Ah the idea that component is greater than the whole. Like when I was a kid the toy in the cereal was more important than the cereal. Or the anticipation of a holiday trip being more exciting than the journey. Or Golden Rough chocolate where the crunchy toasted coconut was more important than the chocky. Evocative piece for salivating consideration.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 February 2012

Your taste brought my saliva/very soft and silky laden with cherry, the red, i like your softness/please read mine comment and vote

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 February 2012

but the thoughts i gather with it Good thought and an interesting poem..

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