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I truly enjoyed this poem from beginning to end! The flow is so great and the rhyme scheme was awesome as well as the amazing imagery.Great imagination was showed and it made it even more interesting to me and made me ((Smile)) when I read at the end that it was a dream! Thanx so much for sharing, you write very well. ==shelley==

Let's hope you don't have too many dreams like this! : -) I like the flow of this poem Jordan! ! Hugs, dee