Sunday, July 12, 2015

The Thief Comments

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He looks, he walks, he grabs his sack
He sneaks, he creeps, he’s on his way back
He puts his sack in his secret pond
And in the flash of a camera, he’s gone
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Kelsey Gallant
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Chinedu Dike 19 July 2015

The stealth and quick movement of a thief well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelsey Gallant 07 July 2018

Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. I just read your Mandela poem and it is very good!

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Allotey Abossey 13 July 2015

You are right... Thieves shouldn't be entertained.... What someone works for years to build, it takes just a few seconds to be stolen

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Kelsey Gallant 07 July 2018

Yes, that is so true.

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