Thursday, August 17, 2017

The Theme That Compels Me, Lovely You Comments

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These lines I write cannot go unrehearsed
reciting to the image that I knew
this voice that shakes exemplifies my verse
and the theme that compels me, lovely you.
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Unwritten Soul 19 August 2017

To read this, and to feel how this lines came out from you...that is like an exploration of feeling, to absorb your words...hmmm...and that last line, it just subtle one but able to crush all the hardest one, but fragile heart! ..Beautiful Dark romance by Captain! :)

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Captain Cur 21 August 2017

I agree hearts are very fragile and should be handled with great care! Thank you Soul for your insightful comment.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 August 2017

I repeated the lines and found that they retained the love. Beautiful sonnet.

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Captain Cur 21 August 2017

Thank you Tirupathi! Perhaps love can never truly be destroyed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 August 2017

The known image is recited in poetic words expressing beauty of voice that shakes and exemplifies verse. Love gives cheerfulness. Repeating and memorizing lines bring joy to heart in such wonderfully worded poem shared here.10

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Captain Cur 18 August 2017

Thank you Kumarmani for your thoughtful comment.

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