Tuesday, January 20, 2015

The Thank You Note Comments

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This is to you and for you,
For being so rich yet poor at heart,
So delicate yet so firm in the LORD,
So weak people would think yet so strong,
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Phanice Wamukota
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Juliki Katana 06 December 2016

It is always good to say thank you!

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Kelvin Karani 23 June 2015

The idea is refreshingly great. Am assuming that the persona is addressing a god-mother of sorts, an elderly woman, married even, who has, and still is, doing great things that inspire them. I think it is possible to cut out some some words to concretize the idea and make the poem even better. Good luck!

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Phanice Wamukota 04 June 2015

Thank you Morris. May The good Lord make it part of His will and allow it to happen.

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Godfrey Morris 30 May 2015

Beautiful prayer thanks for sharing.

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