I am not sure just how contrived I am supposed to be when I write poetry.
The first line I hear within my psyche and my soul is so outrageously over the top
as if competing with rock n' roll. Now that compare I simply know is not true.
Because of a poem I like, it's not like I am going to ask to dance with you.
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Poetry has gotten past the enactment of primary feelings... It electrifies by reflecting upon feelings, or by staging collisions between feelings and thoughts. Just amplify the signal with rapt attention, and you'll find the amplitude is sufficient for tethering. You have a rock-n-roll feel in your poem.
Thank you for the rock n' roll compliment!