The Tethering Arts Poem by Julia Luber

The Tethering Arts



I am not sure just how contrived I am supposed to be when I write poetry.
The first line I hear within my psyche and my soul is so outrageously over the top
as if competing with rock n' roll. Now that compare I simply know is not true.
Because of a poem I like, it's not like I am going to ask to dance with you.
And so rock n roll trumps poetry all of the time. When it comes to presence and action
and place and movement and feeling, poetry is defeated by even a silent mime.
Poetry is the weakest of the tethering arts. It does not draw your actions, accommodates
not your stops and your starts. I might as well be stars dancing on your eyes.
So far away, and not near so brilliant and being so much more like spies
than the obvious commotion of rock n roll-something to make your spirt
AND your body sway and flow. Like spies poems are reserved, on conserve with
action and involving display; not clearly making your pain go away:
like rock n roll knows how to cool and astute, and something to help you in feeling
more than just "he's cute." But doing something about it in some wild funky way.
Setting you up for a jig, a walt, a groovy shaking experience day after day.

Sunday, August 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: competition
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Comparing poetry and rock n roll- no comparison.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 04 August 2019

Poetry has gotten past the enactment of primary feelings... It electrifies by reflecting upon feelings, or by staging collisions between feelings and thoughts. Just amplify the signal with rapt attention, and you'll find the amplitude is sufficient for tethering. You have a rock-n-roll feel in your poem.

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Julia Luber 04 August 2019

Thank you for the rock n' roll compliment!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 August 2019

So far away! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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