The Test Of Time Comments

This poem is very depressing. Because it seems like it doesn't know what its doing. Like all of us are going through life not really knowing what we are, why we are here, or what the point of it all is, just that we have a road and a path and we'll do it. Very... unsettling.

This is really good. One of the best poems I've read so far.

wow this is really good the depth of the writing is beauitful. i can really feel the emotion in this poem. one word: Whoa!

Absolutly Amazing and Beautiful

The darkest journey of other world inhabited by populace of the twilighters........could well open more path and brings human closer to the unexpected! Excellent piece Scarlet.The imagery were superb.

Inspite of a few stumbles and your intermittent disregard for 'rules' (not necessarily a bad thing) that others find so important, you have created a fascinating ambience filled with thoughts and leaving much to the reader's imagination. A fine poem indeed. H

A lot of frenzy in your thoughts and the beautitude of your inner soul is well etched in this wonderful thoughtful poem. arya