The Test Comments

Don't mind at all and I like your ideas, especially 'Crying Sound shrill with fright', instead of my line. I was never really satisfied with it. Thank you always, and always feel free to suggest, critique and comment. That is how we grow.

Night of day, and day of night, Crying sounds throughout the night. (Crying Sound shrill with fright) maybe? ? Time has come, you take the test! (somehow you persued your quest) Last of life, you lay to rest. Somehow you have passed the test(Knowing you have passed the test) just an idea thats all. Hope you don't mind Love this poem. thats why I have written a suggestion at the end. Hugs Jan

Am flabbergasted and at the same time wrestling for answers to the questions this poem filled me with to my utter brink. The prevalent ambiguity and uncertainty is unsettling.Nice work.

Allan, it grew awhile back, but you helped nurture it. And thank you Theodora too, you're the best. Thank You! .

Sandra this is a great piece of art, a wonderful positive poem just what we talked about, was it just born or did you have to grow it With a warmth allan

Wow....That is all I can say Is wow! Theodora Onken