Wednesday, January 14, 2009

The Terrorist Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lived in a block of service flats
Right next to a power grid,
The endless hum made my mind go numb
And infected all I did.
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David Lewis Paget
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 20 January 2015

Fun story very well written incorporating tense and curiosity. Usually I do not red long poems. Yet, I couldn't stop reading this, for it's curiosity. Thanks for sharing.

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Ann Beard 14 January 2009

What a great tale so funny and excellently written I loved it. Regards Ann

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Jim Norausky 14 January 2009

David, Very enjoyable read. Thank you. Jim

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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