The Ten Commandments Comments

This introspection/interpretation of paradoxities is really a wonderful idea. U did it so well.

OMG... I INITIALLY THOUGHT U HAD INTERPRETED THE TEN COMMANDMENTS IN UR OWN STYLE... BUT U LEFT ME FLABBERGASTED...! ! ! !

you know you have the guts to write what you think........you are extremely honest and i like that in your poems

Hello David. A little vulgar for my taste. However, you do have a great way with words, wonderful imagery, good work. LC

I love this poem, what a fine piece....fantastic creation All the best JL

I had really good time reading this poem. great job!

Loved it, David. Don't forget to polish the car before you give it back! F

Ha ha! ! I really like this and no, I'm not very Christian at all (whatever gave you that idea? ? ?) Very funny poem, I grinned through the whole reading! HG: -) xx

Very good as ever, darkly funny with a good insight on life thanks Nik

This poem brought a smile on my face: Thank you for sharing.