Friday, March 20, 2009

The Temptress! Comments

Rating: 5.0

She’s a temptress!
Red lipstick and hot heels
She’s a mystery
She’s a heartbreaker
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Premila Patel
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Daniel Kempson 16 August 2009

Great write Premila good content and men beware 10 Daniel

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Ted M 02 August 2009

Your description of a temptress is so elaborate, there's no room for any doubt.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 May 2009

She’s innocent. Let the mystery unfold… temptress is what mystery yet riffles desire trudges through by degree....most passionate write by imagery, yet irresistible by force of love, crible of unique genre,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Yvonne Selase 08 April 2009

i read this poem twice. it just makes me smile. good work.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 April 2009

Hey can you give me her cell no...............i can match her in every quality..........joking.........10+++++........Good Write.........

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Aldo Kraas 23 March 2009

I am not sure if you are talking about a singer in your poems? I think you are talking about Madonna.

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