Friday, January 23, 2015

The Temptation Comments

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You demon from hell,
spiteful in the wiles you have come,
you reek of scum and
ooze of your cankered bread.
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Elisha Wall
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 20 February 2015

An excellent self revelation, often most wouldn't do. Nice write, with aptly handled paraphrasing. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 27 January 2015

Satan is very shrewd..... he keeps the snare and waits eagerly to see man falling in his trap! He tempted even Jesus! To have temptations is quite natural.... but to get over them, needs courage and grace! Great write!

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Babatunde Aremu 23 January 2015

Nice write. keep your pen flowing and beware of temptation

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