The Temporal Blues Comments

Interesting concept, Max, ... most of us are so fixed on the 7 day cycle we've never really thought about anything beyond. From now on, I'll be sure to keep an eye out. Great write! ! Brian

The temperament of a secular soul and the usual frustration I see in this precious write.Thank you Max.

Wonderful way of explaining the passing of our lives, with each week that goes by. It sounds pretty mundane doesn't it when written like this. Very well thought out and produced. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

I like the tightness and atmosphere of this poem, Max. My favorite part: I enter yet another 7-room house and walk with one eye to the details of each compartment —

Fantastic write, Max. One of your best. Nothing much else to say except keep doing whatever it is you're doing these days, and sharing with us! Cheers, Lori

what can i add to this? it is so full already of insight...in short span...pure form..