The Temple Comments

very saint poem! profound wisdom! thank you!

A very well crafted spiritual poem.........Jayachandran............great imagination and great adoration to temple of heart..............well done...............

loved your temple. a beautiful imagination with nice compose

Wow..Wonderful write. Loved reading it twice...Lovely poem.

Nice poem bro. it reminds me of Keats' lines as he pledged to make a temple in his mind: he says: Yes, I will be thy priest, and build a fane In some untrodden region of my mind, Where branched thoughts, new grown with pleasant pain, Instead of pines shall murmur in the wind: Far, far around shall those dark-cluster'd trees Fledge the wild-ridged mountains steep by steep; And there by zephyrs, streams, and birds, and bees, The moss-lain Dryads shall be lull'd to sleep; And in the midst of this wide quietness A rosy sanctuary will I dress With the wreath'd trellis of a working brain, With buds, and bells, and stars without a name, With all the gardener Fancy e'er could feign, Who breeding flowers, will never breed the same: And there shall be for thee all soft delight That shadowy thought can win...

carpet of happiness, I welcome, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.