Sunday, October 4, 2015

The Teleprompter Comments

Rating: 5.0

It had a life of its own,
The metal pieces from which it was sewn,
Came from a Frankenstein prompter,
An ancestor put together,
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Sandra Feldman
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Daniel Brick 09 October 2015

This a cool-temperatured poem about a hot subject. The insidious spread of a kind of a-moral mind set, the kind that leads to school shootings and massacres in public places. This is a kind of free-floating evil you identify which slips into our presence. Your poem will help us purge ourselves of its influence. As individuals we can free ourselves of its influence. But society as a whole?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2015

Entering our home the teleprompter amazes mind in poem you have shared definitely. Very wise sharing...10

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