Monday, December 12, 2016

The Telepathy Of Time Travel Comments

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A boy in a bright blue hoodie
​i​s on the shoulder of the freeway​
apparently walking, though the cars
​p​ass by so quickly, he is only a blue blip
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Patti Masterman
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Kim Barney 29 December 2016

Great comment by Smoky Hoss, below. Nothing I could have said better. Must agree with him: great poem.

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Smoky Hoss 21 December 2016

Discovering not what we are, rather what we could become, perhaps, is times greatest secret yet to be discovered by all of us. Great poem Patti.

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