The Teenage Blues Comments

Yoir Kerouac poems are short and compressed - there's a KNOT of energy the finished poem displays tom the reader: We are ready to undertake a mission; that knot of energy is ours to use up. This story generates none; it is draining. The real world disappointment shows how impoirtant a figure like Kerouac is

Lovely poem Richard. Well begun is half done. You tried your best at the job.

Much of what you said in your poem, I have said to my own daughter. You must have been a good counselor in addition to being a good poet.