Thursday, September 18, 2014

The Teaser Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I look back
at all the missed chances,
the wilted roses
and numerous advances...(.I realize)
...
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Bernard Snyder
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La Donna Woods 20 July 2016

Wow! Unfortunately some people are like that . Thanks for the poem there's a lesson in this !

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Lyn Paul 21 April 2016

Enjoy your flow of words Bernard. As in your Shark tale. Thank You

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Valsa George 20 September 2014

If you believe this is her intention, better not hang around! If both of you enjoy this teasing game, then carry on! You are either very open here or just try to entertain your readers! Either way, this is an interesting write! Enjoyed much!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 20 September 2014

Awfully impressive poem. Personal feelings of yours are expressed well. Nice one.

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Bernard Snyder

Bernard Snyder

Savannah Ga.
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