Monday, June 9, 2008

The Tease Of Strip Comments

Rating: 2.6

She says she will
if I will.

“So...strip! ”
...
Read full text

Dónall Dempsey
COMMENTS
Steven S 26 August 2009

Bravo... excellent little tale... you're a man much after my own attitudes when it comes to fun between the sexes. Excellent indeed.

0 0 Reply
Dee Dee Wright 09 June 2008

Ha ha...now this is a teaser and as funny and tasty a love poem as you can get without taking off all one's clothes. I read this as I came out of the bath and all my wobbly bits shook with mirth and blushed! I love the way you strip off the different layers of your mind and the who of how you are to be stripped down to an honesty and openness that is a delight to encounter. A man prepared to laugh at himself and subvert the rules of gender and have fun whilst doing it is...alright by me! Tantalising stuff indeed! Your poems are always the full Monty! love Dee Dee

0 0 Reply
Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
Close
Error Success