Saturday, May 3, 2008

The Tears That Fall From My Eyes Comments

Rating: 2.5

The tears that fall from my eyes you cause
Look at your picture from night to night
WHERE ARE YOU!
You cause these tears
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LaVon Clayton
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~ Jon London ~ 04 May 2008

Short, but has impact. A lot of emotion made this a believable write. well done, great job Jon

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Akhil H Kumar 03 May 2008

Very nice poem! Enjoyed it very much. Take a look at Athul who is ten.I am sure you would enjoy his poems.

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LaVon Clayton

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