Friday, February 14, 2014

The Tears Of An Illegal Immigrant Comments

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In the detention centres of the queen’s kingdom;
There we sat down, yea, we wept;
When we thought of home.
And we sang a sweet song of freedom;
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Kuda Bondamakara
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Kathy Van Kurin 27 February 2017

Kuda bondamakara, Thank you for writing The tears of an illegal immigrant. so much in this world that is a part of this human world. Your song is a beautiful deep song. So many people do not have answers or an easy way but with a voice at least their is a place of release to share feelings with others. again this is a very painful and difficult subject. Thank you for writing...............bless you in your life and writing................Kathy

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Kuda Bondamakara 28 February 2017

thanks Kathy for the very kind words.

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Tom Allport 27 February 2017

a sad poem of having your freedom taken away? well expressed!

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Kuda Bondamakara 28 February 2017

thanks Tom for reading and leaving a comment

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Chinedu Dike 25 December 2014

Living in diaspora without valid permit and the consequences well depicted in the poem. Another well penned narrative poem. Kudos KUDA!

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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 20 September 2014

So touching.nice one

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