Monday, June 28, 2010

The Tears I Cry Are Not For You Comments

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The tears I cry are not for you
The tears I cry are for me and only me
The tears I cry are always blue
The tears that I won't let you, so you cannot see
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Hope Elizabeth
Tears pain
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Adeline Foster 28 June 2010

Very well stated an a good poem. However it is marred by a double word in the eighth line and perhaps it could benefit with a comma after 'cannot' in the fourth line. Adeline

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Hope Elizabeth

Hope Elizabeth

Virginia
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Virginia
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