Wednesday, September 16, 2015

The Tears. Comments

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She was wiping her tears
Noticed she were in shabby dresses
And looked for a long distance
Where it saw a marriage party going
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Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2015

The pain and agony no one can share The selfless love there it curtained The sad heart of poor girl, someone tells..........True dictum. No one can share the sad heart of poor girl. Nicely envisioned and beautifully depicted. TFS. .....10

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M Asim Nehal 16 September 2015

Nice sketch of a poor hapless girl.........I liked it.10.

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