Friday, May 31, 2019

The Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

To you
As I stand in the grass with dew
My ripped Vans are soaked
I swear to the g-ds
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Kingsley Egbukole 28 September 2023

Expressing sad emotions. But let the tears flow to get some relief.

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Anjandev Roy 28 September 2023

This is a superb piece..... thank u... LeeAnn...

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Dr. Antony Theodore 09 May 2021

I don't want the tears Glistening in the light What a fine expression. tears..such a great sorrow pictured so well that the reader is sad with you. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 May 2021

Most intelligently said and composed, LeeAnn, I constantly enjoyed the humor in your poems, brilliantly formulated, thank you so much for sharing this amazing poem.

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Anjandev Roy 07 February 2021

Fantastic......thanks for sharing...

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Dr. Antony Theodore 01 February 2021

I don't want the tears Glistening in the light.. So meaningful dear LeeAnn. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 January 2021

A 5 Stars poem, dear Poetess! Finest poem loveliest rendered, inner sadness greatest worded. My two thumbs up for you, LeeAnn!

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Kim Barney 20 October 2020

Don't be afraid to let the tears show, but go ahead and let them flow; that just lets others know what's in your heart.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 August 2020

A poignant piece of work! Short but highly expressive.....10

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Bharati Nayak 01 May 2020

A touching expression of inner sadness, When we keep our pain within ourselves, we do not want it to show others.Tear is also a great reliever

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 April 2020

Better go in Because I don't want the tears Glistening in the light.. glistening tears. fine imagery. tony

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Luz Hanaii 04 January 2020

Sadness expressed in such a lovely and gentle way. Giving you a Big 10+

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 December 2019

I swear to the g-ds The sun is too bright To stay outside Better go in Because I don't want the tears Glistening in the light.. sadness described in a very original way dear poetess. thank u always. tony

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Chinedu Dike 16 December 2019

Well articulated and nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 June 2019

Better go in Because I don't want the tears Glistening in the light.. glistening tears..... fine expression conveying the feelings. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 June 2019

Better to go in. Sadness! ! ! The tears. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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C F 15 June 2019

Very good expression of sadness... 10+ The sun is too bright To stay outside Better go in Because I don't want the tears Glistening in the light

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 June 2019

Tears glistening in the light....... great. your mind expresses itself in great comparisons. it is a great poetic quality of your thoughts. tony

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Mj Lemon 31 May 2019

Palpable, profound sorrow. A gem, Leeann. This verse goes to myfavourites.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 May 2019

nice very nice keep writing we all r reading your poetry is in all veins poetess read mine daily thanks

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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