To you
As I stand in the grass with dew
My ripped Vans are soaked
I swear to the g-ds
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I don't want the tears Glistening in the light What a fine expression. tears..such a great sorrow pictured so well that the reader is sad with you. tony
Most intelligently said and composed, LeeAnn, I constantly enjoyed the humor in your poems, brilliantly formulated, thank you so much for sharing this amazing poem.
I don't want the tears Glistening in the light.. So meaningful dear LeeAnn. tony
A 5 Stars poem, dear Poetess! Finest poem loveliest rendered, inner sadness greatest worded. My two thumbs up for you, LeeAnn!
Don't be afraid to let the tears show, but go ahead and let them flow; that just lets others know what's in your heart.
A poignant piece of work! Short but highly expressive.....10
A touching expression of inner sadness, When we keep our pain within ourselves, we do not want it to show others.Tear is also a great reliever
Better go in Because I don't want the tears Glistening in the light.. glistening tears. fine imagery. tony
Sadness expressed in such a lovely and gentle way. Giving you a Big 10+
I swear to the g-ds The sun is too bright To stay outside Better go in Because I don't want the tears Glistening in the light.. sadness described in a very original way dear poetess. thank u always. tony
Well articulated and nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing.
Better go in Because I don't want the tears Glistening in the light.. glistening tears..... fine expression conveying the feelings. tony
Better to go in. Sadness! ! ! The tears. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Very good expression of sadness... 10+ The sun is too bright To stay outside Better go in Because I don't want the tears Glistening in the light
Tears glistening in the light....... great. your mind expresses itself in great comparisons. it is a great poetic quality of your thoughts. tony
Palpable, profound sorrow. A gem, Leeann. This verse goes to myfavourites.
nice very nice keep writing we all r reading your poetry is in all veins poetess read mine daily thanks
Expressing sad emotions. But let the tears flow to get some relief.