A drop of tears
booked me in den of sad,
carried brook of soreness,
detained full my enjoyment,
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I see a beautiful arrangement in your poem. You have written this poem astutely and alphabetically in an acrostic manner. A lovely poem with nice theme.
If Akhtar ji says ur good ur good its like acrostic must make it a bit sexy more bees will fly ung one @32 ye?
It was not an easy job but you wrote wonderful poem arranging the lines in alphabetic order, still the poem never lost its beauty. Great work!
A poignant poem! Appreciated the way you have presented tears