Wednesday, June 20, 2018

The Tear Comments

Rating: 4.8

A drop of tears
booked me in den of sad,
carried brook of soreness,
detained full my enjoyment,
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 February 2024

A poignant poem! Appreciated the way you have presented tears

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018

I see a beautiful arrangement in your poem. You have written this poem astutely and alphabetically in an acrostic manner. A lovely poem with nice theme.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 June 2018

If Akhtar ji says ur good ur good its like acrostic must make it a bit sexy more bees will fly ung one @32 ye?

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Akhtar Jawad 20 June 2018

It was not an easy job but you wrote wonderful poem arranging the lines in alphabetic order, still the poem never lost its beauty. Great work!

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