The Tear Comments

I love this; the idea, the flow, the word choice, I love all of it. A very interesting concept/story, you're writing style adds to the meaning of it. Keep up the good writing! =)

In the beginning, you seem arrogant. In the end, you are surrendering. What a transformation after the friends of your pouch and table abandoned you! I think abundant money in ladies' pockets hinder them from seeing the truth. Good poem.