Friday, October 28, 2005

The Tattoo Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wearing little
but pants
a grin and cigar
you laughed
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Carsten Thomsen
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Carsten I think this is a fabulous poem...I'd ditch the very last line. In my opinion, it would be perfect without it.

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Mary Nagy 28 October 2005

Very graphic scene you've shown Carsten. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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