The Tattered Tallit Comments

I understand where you are coming from with this tuneful poem Linda, but I don't believe in destroying my now or future, by despairing of the past. The love will never stop, but nor shall I. I will always seek a brighter future and try and understand the reasons why. Otherwise, I may as well give up and die, and that would never do, would it. I enjoyed the flow of this mournful little poem, but the ending was rather abrupt. Just a thought. Like love affairs I suppose? Smiling at you with 9 from Tai

I agree with Jeremiah - sad and musical. Also unusual, which is nice.

sad and musical, Linda. sad