Thursday, April 30, 2009

The Taste Of Death Comments

Rating: 4.9

The taste of salt is the pinch of life,
The sweetness of sugar, the wine of life
But the taste of Cyanide is death,
What if it were sweeter than sugar?
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Ravi Panamanna
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Vidi Writes 05 May 2009

Sweet, bitter, soar or salty All are tastes As long as the tongue favours to taste the life Varieties of relish fills the void. But death... Taste of Death...: -( This title made me probe for a while... Life's one of the tatstes may bring death And it looks as it death is tasteless. Thoughts thoroughly provoked. Good one. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.

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Catrina Heart 03 May 2009

saddened piece....mass suicide occurs now in relation to global economic crisis...Fine theme to share! Thanks! ! !

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Sandra Fowler 03 May 2009

The loss of life is a tragedy however it occurs. Very well written. But sadness prevails. Kind regards, Sandra

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Eyan Desir 02 May 2009

Good write a bit sad Keep writtin dear poet

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Aldo Kraas 02 May 2009

That poem is very interesting

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 02 May 2009

The taste of death is like a taste of cyanide..............No one has ever return to tell how it taste or feel..............Good Write.............

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 May 2009

'But the world hath a strange mind, It is after the taste of death. It doesn’t search the fountains of life It doesn’t enrich her creative hours.' Yes the world has had a strange mind always.It is after the taste of death where love has to sacrifice coz' it has no weapons other than a bleeding heart.And blood cannot kill anyone.It only adds life every dropp of it unless it is affected with any lethal disease.But for someone life becomes very stagnant..for someone who has less social mobility like statesmen.They have to become scapegoats then.Nothing more.Sometimes of love, sometimes of fate.Without the knowledge whether they tasted death or death tasted them.A very poignant write.A 10 from me.

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the taste of death...may be it was tasteless..a lovely poem

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Joseph Poewhit 02 May 2009

Poison is one form of death. Though be sure, we all die in our GOD appointed time in life.

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Ravi Panamanna

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Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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