Thursday, November 17, 2005

The Tarnished Princess Comments

Rating: 4.8

She walks with envy
Thinking everyone has more than she does
So she lies and steals
Manipulates situations to her advantage
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Wanda Swim Strunk
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C. Michael Miller 29 November 2005

A recklessly written, vibrant poem! Reminds me of snake shedding skin and then turning into a chameleon. Great work here.

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Vanessa Brown 17 November 2005

nice work, like this poem a lot!

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Linda Jenkinson 17 November 2005

very well observed...i like the dangerous ending very much!

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