I have never known
Someone as obedient
And enduring as you
Imprisoned under the clutches
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This has such true beautiful sentiment! .. That flows from the true heart of a poetess! ..
Absolutely incredible! .. Written of such awe, beauty and heart! .. And I feel like I'm understating! ..
We all know tress are alive and they have their own consciousness. Yet, reading this poem it feels as if the tree that you have been amidst, in dialogue with you comes more alive... Now, I am old And you are still here Holding my cherished Childhood memories... Brilliant.
(4) ..You have become one with the tree, if I may say so, because the story reads like a conversation between two persons. I admire your beautiful and well worded tribute to The Tall Trees in Your Backyard. A poem to remember. A 10+++++++ for the voting; ratings.God's Blessings in Abundance be upon thee and thy beloved family. Amen.
(3) ....That fascinating adventure I still can feel now, due to your lovely and dashing description.. You have analyzed the tree very well. The story has become a societal subject of attractive philosophical exposure. This is a perfect view from both sides, Mrs. Juan-Austin...........................Please read (4)
(2) ... The benefits that you now receive can all be read in this excellent tribute. One and all an exciting adventure. I really enjoyed this fascinating story. Since I have been climbing in tall trees too in my childhood. Please read (3)
Excellent poem about a tree where you were so attached in your childhood. Precious childhood memories, Mrs. Juan-Austin. As an you have gained other appreciation for this familiar tree. The fact that the tree still is there, makes your memories sweeter. Despite the heavy rains, thunderstorms and more it is still there.. Please read (2)
In line 3 must be: As an person...........Thank you for reading
Why does PH not let it stay as I had written that correction? Every time PH put that word A D U L T away, I really don't understand. Thank you for your understanding and patience, Mrs. Juan-Austin
Nothing less than 10+++, though this poem deserves more than that,
Outstanding poem. There can be no better ally than trees, they are our true friends.. Now, I am old And you are still here Holding my cherished Childhood memories Intact and alive In your rough barks That bear the prints Of my joys and pains In life.
Beautiful poem It is all Nature our love for nature shows we are still alive in material WORLD.
Now, I am old And you are still here Holding my cherished Childhood memories Intact and alive In your rough barks That bear the prints Of my joys and pains In life........brilliant poetic expression. A beautiful poem having nice theme. Thanks for sharing.
You are my green curtains From the probing eyes Of passersby My walls From the harshness of the wind Your halos that sparkle in the light Give comfort against theheat and rain Clean the air for me to live...........so touching. A beautiful poem on tree nicely executed.10
This is a lovely poem on trees.... Nature's greatest gift to man! Their lush green foliage, their sturdy trunk, the flowers they produce, the fruits they give, the shade and shelter they offer...... innumerable are the benefits of trees! They brave the wind and rain and stay firmly rooted on Earth as a friend of man, purifying the air we breathe....! An apt and wonderful tribute! A 10
You are my green curtains From the probing eyes Of passersby Lovely lines of a lovely poem.
In your wide /And uneven trunks/I rest my tired body/The touch felt/Like a hug/From a mother's Loving arms……….I appreciate the wonderful power of creativity! The depth of your imagination! Stay always blessed!
(cont.) ...i don't understand/follow the meaning(s) here: In your wide//And uneven trunks//I rest my tired body AND more favorite lines: And you are still here//Holding my cherished//Childhood memories//Intact and alive//In your rough barks..............i like your line arrangement. so, i guess 'you' won't be chopping down the trees soon! ! to MyPoemList. i 'love' to look at and climb trees. but i also prune some (some) .........to suit my 'desires'! ! bri ;)
I really appreciate your in depth review of this poem, Bri. Your insights are well taken. Thank you for your time and visit.
some favorite lines: You are my green curtains//From the probing eyes//Of passersby//My walls// From the harshness of the wind........... [i 'hate' when i can't see past the trees when i'm on one of my 'peeping Tom' sprees! ! ! ] (to be continued) .............
A tinge of humor in your comments always make me smile. Thank you for the nice comments.
A brilliant poem! ....Now, I am old/And you are still here/Holding my cherished/Childhood memories...You expression lots of love and emotions for the tall trees....thanks Rose for sharing...10
A wonderful comment, Dr. Dillip. Thank you for the visit.
Awesome imagery and feel! .. Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++++++