shhhh.....
.....drumming
they're coming...
and again,
...
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I wish I could hear this read out - it deserves to be performed. Wonderful pace and rhythm. Original, creative and distinctictly Audette! Justine
Fantabulous Chuck. Witty, clever, and choc full of imagination. Hugs Anna xxx
This is Chuckful of fantastical fun, my punning pal! ! ! ! You may have outdone yourself with this tale of Lust and Punishment! Too much fun, this, and a keeper to boot. (Only complaint: I barely helped you, so that credit is sweet but misplaced! THANKS, tho' - you're the King, all right) ! Est: ]
A terrific blend of humor and insanity. The chief's daugher gets to keep your manly profile, eh? Hahaha. I assume that's not subject, like your head, to being shrunken.
Charles, you are the king of satire, you keep us all 'tickled pink! ' And, kudos to Esther as well! Brian
Chuck, I would bet you thought they had some gold : At first I tried to understand, why you would bring that up, ... with the daughter of the chief, it would have been a shorter thing, ... if you said you were a thief ! I suspect they caught you coming, more than likely, just by chance, but, if you had not messed with her, ... and kept things in your pants, you would not have to try to blame poor Esther! B.V.A.