The Tale Of Departure Retold Comments

Very nice

Death is part of us on this earth. Nice work

dear ones live your lives Beautiful message. For those who leave it is a release. Past for them is erased. Those who live remember them. Nice poem. Thank you.

the important thing is how we live our lives. Making the most of each day. We enter and some day we must leave being happy whie we are here is important. a good read

Life is but one long corridor With doors at either end And its natural that we eventually leave With or without proper goodbyes said...... (good work - keep writing)

A great poem, I love the line, everyone has to kick the bucket once. A really great write.

Excellent Dinesh. We are here but for a very short span, as indeed is mankind's entire existence - just a flash in the cosmos. Very philosophical write, enjoyed reading.

a perfect read, like a smooth ride...a modern epic of human life, without any exaggeration...i took it to heart personally...! ! !

an amazing poem Sir...loved it...........a very nice message to live the life to the entirety to leave no regrets later

This is no way a gilded tale, but every line, an assertion and extension of a blatant truth! The story of generations coming into this world where everyone has an equal right of belonging and exiting out to leave way for the succeeding generation! For everyone, there comes a time when all our movements freeze. ' None has the privilege to extend the stay much beyond the mark' So, dear ones live your lives just for a mere show And board the train that zooms into oblivion. A beautiful poem... plain and transparent with no extra embellishments !

An excellent write. Specially loved the stanza: 'We have all come for a mere short stay.... ........ The ones over staying leave with wetter eyes....' Loved reading it, most certainly would attract several visits.

Fantastic write..Yes, everyone has to kick the bucket once. Every one have to perish once. Burried once. Beautiful Souls are those whose memories are still alive in our hearts. Yes, if we could be counted in that, what more can be beautiful than that..Some people make so much impact in other lives that they are often remembered. Yes, there are many whose birth as well as death is not known to anyone.... As usual, beautiful way it is presented..Loved reading it.